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Two Missing Commas
07-17-2015, 07:33 AM
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RE: Two Missing Commas
(07-17-2015 03:40 AM)Maxwell Grantly Wrote:  I believe that there are two missing commas in the last two sentences of this article - one in each sentence. This may cause a slight misunderstanding in how the cats can breed.

http://kittycats.biz/help/article.php?id=63

For example one sentence currently reads:

"Breeding 2 Confetti KittyCats with an Confetti KittyCatS Offspring."

It seems to imply that the example is referring to how two confetti kittens can breed with their offspring. I think the sentence should read as ...

"Breeding 2 Confetti KittyCats, with an Confetti KittyCatS Offspring."

Or possibly:

"Breeding 2 Confetti KittyCats (with an Confetti KittyCatS Offspring.)"

The same issue is present in the second sentence of these two last sentences in the article. I know it might seem petty but I read the false meaning into both sentences at first and became confused, until I studied the tables in the manual for clarification.

changed Smile hope it is clear now....
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Messages In This Thread
Two Missing Commas - Maxwell Grantly - 07-17-2015, 03:40 AM
RE: Two Missing Commas - Tad Carlucci - 07-17-2015, 04:59 AM
RE: Two Missing Commas - Equinox Pinion - 07-17-2015 07:33 AM
RE: Two Missing Commas - MsMagick Resident - 07-20-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Two Missing Commas - Maxwell Grantly - 07-17-2015, 10:54 AM
RE: Two Missing Commas - Winter Phoenix - 07-19-2015, 05:42 PM



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